GRUDGE OF BROKEN HEART

Why, the moon knows.

Why did you cry last night?

The moon knows, why?

It was you who left me.

I was not enough, I know

I was half loved, every time

Tried to fix my blurred,

Faded and incomplete way

Just a quadrupled gesture

Just an outraged and withered

Part that has faded me,

Plucked me out.

It was just hard to unlove .

Never can the sun shine,

To end the never ending gloom.

The theme of this poem is heartbreak and the pain of unrequited love. The speaker expresses their feelings of hurt and betrayal as they mourn the loss of their love. They are struggling to come to terms with the fact that they were not enough for their lover, and they were only ever half-loved. The theme of heartbreak is evident in the way the speaker describes their emotions, using words such as "blurry," "faded," and "incomplete."

The poem revolves around the metaphor of the moon, representing the unknown and the uncertain. The moon is often used to symbolize emotions, and in this case, it represents the speaker's feelings of confusion and uncertainty about their relationship. The moon knows the reason for the speaker's tears, suggesting that there is some hidden meaning behind the heartbreak that the speaker cannot fully comprehend.

The poem also touches on the theme of unrequited love, which is evident in the speaker's feelings of being half-loved. They feel like they have given everything they have to offer but were never truly appreciated or loved in return. The theme of unrequited love is further reinforced by the lines, "Just a quadrupled gesture/Just an outraged and withered/Part that has faded me/Plucked me out," which suggest that the speaker's efforts to fix their relationship were in vain and only led to further hurt and pain.

In summary, this poem is a heartfelt expression of the pain and heartbreak of unrequited love. The speaker's use of the moon as a metaphor for their emotions adds a sense of mystery and depth to the poem. The theme of heartbreak is evident in the speaker's descriptions of their feelings, while the theme of unrequited love is reinforced through their feelings of being half-loved. Ultimately, this poem captures the raw emotions of heartbreak and unrequited love in a powerful and moving way.

Author's note 

Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a  books (100 years of my painful nights, Nights in solitude). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system. 

NIGHTS-IN-SOLITUDE-

A creative writing technique is usually characterized by a certain rhythm and style. The modern poet wears many hats: he can write ghazals, produce commercial genre, create poetry books, write for greeting card companies, work for websites and compete in competitions; Just to have a few names.

 Learn the basics of poetry.

 A poet is one who conveys ideas and emotions to others through the written word. Although many people associate poetry with words that make poetry, a poet can choose one of the many different ways of writing to convey his message.

I will share some important ways to build a poem. 

1 Read a lot of basic poetry. 

2 improve your vocabulary (literary words). 

3 write what you feel in day to day life on a roughly page then arrange them with minimum word length. 

4 Use concrete thoughts and give them shape use poetic devices like metaphors, similies, images, personification, oxymoron etc.... 

5 Match thoughts and then you will start to become a Eminant poet.. 

         You can also read my poetry on my Personal Blog or on Youtube Poetry Blog. 

PRISON OF OUTRAGE

 

As I, fumbling with horror,

Rushing towards the terror,

Gazing at padlocks of chains,

I the prisoner of outrage. 

Windowless walls,

Breathless expectancy,

Questioning the misty night,

Stucked within rusty bars.

That anguish of the anger

Absolves my fate,and

Fighting with my angry soul, 

Will free me from prison of outrage.

The theme of the above poem is the experience of being imprisoned by one's own anger and the struggle to overcome it. The speaker describes feeling trapped and helpless in the face of their emotions, which have become like chains and walls that keep them locked in a state of turmoil.

The poem opens with a sense of urgency and horror as the speaker rushes towards some unknown danger. They are metaphorically imprisoned by their own anger, which is depicted as physical chains and padlocks. The windowless walls suggest a sense of claustrophobia and isolation, while the misty night adds to the sense of uncertainty and unease.

As the poem progresses, the speaker reflects on their own emotional state and the toll it is taking on them. They feel breathless and expectant, as if waiting for some kind of release or resolution. The questions they ask of the misty night suggest a desire for answers or understanding, but they are met only with silence.

The final stanza suggests that the speaker recognizes the need to confront their own anger and fight against it. They describe their anger as an anguish that has trapped them, but they also express hope that they can overcome it. By struggling against their angry soul, they hope to free themselves from the prison of outrage.

Overall, the poem explores the experience of being trapped by one's own emotions and the struggle to find a way out. It suggests that while anger can be a powerful and overwhelming emotion, it is possible to overcome it through self-reflection and determination. The imagery of chains, walls, and rust emphasizes the sense of imprisonment, while the final stanza offers a glimmer of hope and the possibility of freedom.

About Author:

 It is rightly said words have the power to bring a better change in a person and a society. Aadil Ghulam Bhat from Hablishi village of South Kashmir's Kulgam district has released his book titled “NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE” Aadil Ghulam always thought poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system.His creative writing technique is usually characterised by a certain rhythm and style."Nights in solitude" is a poetry book consisting about 55 poem. The book is available at everywhere for readers in paperback and ebook as well. They need to understand that time is the one thing in life that you can never get back. Once it's gone, it's gone forever. So let's stop wasting time, and start a chance 

NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE'' is the heartbreaking poetry book and never ending lessons of life.

       To write to endure is the motive of this poetry and probably there is a lot of collection that arise from day to day thoughts. The book contains 54 poems as far that were composed in mean time.you can enjoy these poems as a never ending quest for endurance and fulfilment.

 

     Aadil ghulam bhat wrote his all story in poetry form that increases the beauty of his thougths and gave birth to this book.

AADIL GHULAM BHAT ENGLISH POET AND NOVELIST.

 It is rightly said words have the power to bring a better change in a person and a society. Aadil Ghulam Bhat from Hablishi village of South Kashmir's Kulgam district has released his book titled “NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE” Aadil Ghulam always thought poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system.His creative writing technique is usually characterised by a certain rhythm and style."Nights in solitude" is a poetry book consisting about 55 poem. The book is available at everywhere for readers in paperback and ebook as well. They need to understand that time is the one thing in life that you can never get back. Once it's gone, it's gone forever. So let's stop wasting time, and start a chance 

NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE'' is the heartbreaking poetry book and never ending lessons of life.

       To write to endure is the motive of this poetry and probably there is a lot of collection that arise from day to day thoughts. The book contains 54 poems as far that were composed in mean time.you can enjoy these poems as a never ending quest for endurance and fulfilment.

 

     Aadil ghulam bhat wrote his all story in poetry form that increases the beauty of his thougths and gave birth to this book.

THE BLADE OF DEFEAT

Through withering laurels , aloofness trapped me inside. 

I'm yet going and being shunned. 

The silence of aloneness nagged me inside. 

I'm digging my grave to shun to  be enslaved. 

The sword of shinning blade, chopped

My shield of ecstasy soul, 

My blithe chains to blood streams, 

My sunny days to cruel and awful nights. 

When my songs, my cries, my silences

Were being heard days after i was slain. 

As i in the cradle of grave much scorned

My defeat, the blade of defeat reached my fullness.

The theme of the given poem is the feeling of being trapped in a cycle of defeat, aloofness, and loneliness. The speaker expresses their struggle to break free from this cycle, but ultimately succumbs to it. They feel as if they are being shunned and ignored by others, which exacerbates their feelings of isolation. Despite their attempts to resist, they ultimately give in and allow themselves to be enslaved by their own defeat.

The imagery used throughout the poem reinforces this sense of despair and hopelessness. The "withering laurels" suggest that the speaker's achievements and successes are fading away, leaving them with nothing to show for their efforts. The "sword of shinning blade" symbolizes the destructive forces that are working against the speaker, cutting them down and leaving them vulnerable. The "shield of ecstasy soul" represents the speaker's inner strength and resilience, which is being eroded by their circumstances.

The repeated use of "my" emphasizes the poet's personal struggle and isolation. They feel as if they are alone in their pain, with no one to turn to or help them. This sense of solitude is further emphasized by the contrast between "sunny days" and "cruel and awful nights." The speaker's world has turned dark and bleak, and they are unable to find any light or hope.

The final lines of the poem suggest that the speaker has been defeated completely, with the "blade of defeat" reaching their "fullness." The fact that their "songs, cries, and silences" are only heard after their death reinforces the idea that they were ignored and neglected while alive.

Overall, the poem conveys a sense of despair and hopelessness. The speaker feels trapped in a cycle of defeat and isolation, with no way out. The imagery used throughout the passage reinforces this sense of despair, with the final lines suggesting that the speaker has been defeated completely.

 

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Author's note 

Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a poetry book (100 years of my painful nights). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system. 

A creative writing technique is usually characterized by a certain rhythm and style. The modern poet wears many hats: he can write ghazals, produce commercial genre, create poetry books, write for greeting card companies, work for websites and compete in competitions; Just to have a few names.

 Learn the basics of poetry.

 A poet is one who conveys ideas and emotions to others through the written word. Although many people associate poetry with words that make poetry, a poet can choose one of the many different ways of writing to convey his message.

I will share some important ways to build a poem. 

1 Read a lot of basic poetry. 

2 improve your vocabulary (literary words). 

3 write what you feel in day to day life on a roughly page then arrange them with minimum word length. 

4 Use concrete thoughts and give them shape use poetic devices like metaphors, similies, images, personification, oxymoron etc.... 

5 Match thoughts and then you will start to become a Eminant poet.. 

         You can also read my poetry on my Personal Blog or on Youtube Poetry Blog. 

RETURN MY YEARS

I may seek the lonelier way

Where i fill my another day

In the wind of dark fears, 

I'm soundless, Ay..... Return my years. 

Yet the mist reposing within me

And of painful nights to gridled destiny. 

In the solitude of dark mist, i stood

Begging to return my lost years from hood. 

The day will end now, walk to sky, 

In the solitude of my souls, i cry. 

From the cage of tyranny, all i bears, 

I'm Upwrought with confusion, return my years. 

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Author's note 

Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a poetry book (100 years of my painful nights). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system. 

A creative writing technique is usually characterized by a certain rhythm and style. The modern poet wears many hats: he can write ghazals, produce commercial genre, create poetry books, write for greeting card companies, work for websites and compete in competitions; Just to have a few names.

 Learn the basics of poetry.

 A poet is one who conveys ideas and emotions to others through the written word. Although many people associate poetry with words that make poetry, a poet can choose one of the many different ways of writing to convey his message.

I will share some important ways to build a poem. 

1 Read a lot of basic poetry. 

2 improve your vocabulary (literary words). 

3 write what you feel in day to day life on a roughly page then arrange them with minimum word length. 

4 Use concrete thoughts and give them shape use poetic devices like metaphors, similies, images, personification, oxymoron etc.... 

5 Match thoughts and then you will start to become a Eminant poet.. 

         You can also read my poetry on my Personal Blog or on Youtube Poetry Blog. 

WINGLESS BIRD.

A wingless bird springs on the back of the wind. 

With tied feet clipped wing floats down to ground. 

His slow return, silent walk, crawling like a blind. 

Skinned into the warm embraces, bursting tiny wound. 

With the gridled nights, with eloquent  Sorrow, 

With a fearful trill, with his soulful cries. 

What will be exalted, be enthroned or to be enslaved,

And now he called ofhandedly, " I will still arise".

As slave of a tyrant winds, sings a song to be free. 

The caged bird, wingless bird, that's me, that's me. 

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ONCE AGAIN OLD MEMORIES PERSECUTE

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Author's note 

Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a poetry book (100 years of my painful nights). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system. 

A creative writing technique is usually characterized by a certain rhythm and style. The modern poet wears many hats: he can write ghazals, produce commercial genre, create poetry books, write for greeting card companies, work for websites and compete in competitions; Just to have a few names.

 Learn the basics of poetry.

 A poet is one who conveys ideas and emotions to others through the written word. Although many people associate poetry with words that make poetry, a poet can choose one of the many different ways of writing to convey his message.

I will share some important ways to build a poem. 

1 Read a lot of basic poetry. 

2 improve your vocabulary (literary words). 

3 write what you feel in day to day life on a roughly page then arrange them with minimum word length. 

4 Use concrete thoughts and give them shape use poetic devices like metaphors, similies, images, personification, oxymoron etc.... 

5 Match thoughts and then you will start to become a Eminant poet.. 

         You can also read my poetry on my Personal Blog or on Youtube Poetry Blog. 

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WALK IN WET WEEKEND.

Thy dear steps are in bloom.

Haven't you heard my scream?

In far off woods, lonely I stood ! 

Worse things i have been endured. 

Behold I shine, my ashes fling !

Upon me look ! Chop this string

Come, let us ascend now to mead. 

Throbbing beats, haven't you heard. 

The dazzling dew on tips of grass, 

A swishing sound like of brass, 

The singing dove in woods call. 

A restless brook appeared for all. 

Each evening thy moments recall. 

My mind has run astray, all and fall. 

If the worst is bound to happen and troll

I neither dubbed nor foozled the soul.

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Author's note 

Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a poetry book (100 years of my painful nights). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system. 

A creative writing technique is usually characterized by a certain rhythm and style. The modern poet wears many hats: he can write ghazals, produce commercial genre, create poetry books, write for greeting card companies, work for websites and compete in competitions; Just to have a few names.

 Learn the basics of poetry.

 A poet is one who conveys ideas and emotions to others through the written word. Although many people associate poetry with words that make poetry, a poet can choose one of the many different ways of writing to convey his message.

I will share some important ways to build a poem. 

1 Read a lot of basic poetry. 

2 improve your vocabulary (literary words). 

3 write what you feel in day to day life on a roughly page then arrange them with minimum word length. 

4 Use concrete thoughts and give them shape use poetic devices like metaphors, similies, images, personification, oxymoron etc.... 

5 Match thoughts and then you will start to become a Eminant poet.. 

         You can also read my poetry on my Personal Blog or on Youtube Poetry Blog.