Let me not to the accredited
of fake promises
To me, fair you, you never
can be old,
You see my antique pen would
have expressed
Even such a beauty as you
alter now.
I Have eyes to wonder,
but lack words to praise.
Yes my love, swears that
you are made of truth
I do believe on both sides
thus is simple truth suppress’d
You are water to life and
I'm soul to fire.
So long as you can breathe,
or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this
gives life to me.
The poem is actually a sonnet written by Aadil Ghulam Bhat that speaks of a love that is so strong and true that it transcends time and space. The poet declares that he will not be swayed by false promises, and that the beauty of his love is eternal and unchanging. He compares his beloved to a work of art that cannot be altered, even by the passage of time. The poet is in awe of his beloved's beauty and acknowledges that his words are inadequate to express the depth of his admiration.
The poem expresses the belief that true love is a force that can overcome all obstacles and endure forever. The poet's love for his beloved is not based on external qualities, such as wealth or social status, but on the intrinsic goodness and truth that he perceives in her. The poet believes that his love is reciprocated, and that his beloved is also made of truth.
The power of poetry is also a central theme in the poem. The poet recognizes that words alone are insufficient to convey the depth of his love, but he also acknowledges the importance of poetry in expressing the inexpressible. The poet's antique pen is a symbol of the enduring power of poetry, and his inability to fully capture his beloved's beauty with words underscores the ineffable nature of true love.
The poem's concluding couplet affirms the timeless nature of the poet's love. The poet declares that as long as he and his beloved are alive, their love will continue to exist, and that their love gives life to him. This final affirmation reinforces the theme of the enduring power of love and the ability of true love to transcend time and space.
In summary, the poem is a beautiful expression of the enduring power of love and the importance of poetry in capturing the essence of that love. It is a timeless reminder that true love is not based on superficial qualities, but on the intrinsic truth and goodness that exist within a person.
Authors Note:
Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a books (100 years of my painful nights, Nights in solitude). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system.
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Comments
His early writing prepared him for a life to tackle the depression, but through endurance large and small, hate and love, anger and smile, he came to realize that he was a "man with noble thoughts". People saw in him only a reflection of their preconceived depression and anxiety of what he was, denied his individuality, and ultimately did not see him at all. These poems, which has implications far beyond the emotional bond, is skillfully handled.
What a power to his pen, what an appreciable work.
He is none other than The Legend Mr 'Aadil Ghulam Bhat'
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