Wednesday, December 28, 2022

A Tale of Strategy and Valor



I wade ashore at the crack of dawn with a spear and a shield in my hands. 

I must have frequently trod on death unaware.

The square sails of our fleet flutter in the breeze behind me 

As the dragons search for my adversary and their little spears, 

Which swarm like flies. The mail coat rubs on my shoulders.

I have no escape from the sea, but none is desired, 

So by the next high tide either my fanatic will point as promised 

Or the battle-watchers will have taken me all.

I am a thread in the tapestry of history today.


Poem summary:

The poem above is a short, descriptive piece that paints a picture of a warrior wading ashore at dawn, ready for battle.
"A Tale of Strategy and Valor", seems to be a descriptive tale of a warrior who has just arrived on a beach at dawn, ready to engage in battle, based on the context provided in the poem. The savage wields a spear and a shield, and their mail coat, which is causing discomfort to their shoulders, is rubbing against them. Behind the warrior, the square sails of the fleet can be seen flapping in the breeze as dragons search for the adversary and their small spears. The fighter has no interest in evading the sea even if they are aware of the possibility that they would perish there. Instead, they wait for their opponent to arrive or for the eyes of those who are watching the conflict to fall upon them. The statement that the fighter is now a thread in the tapestry of history serves as a fitting conclusion to the section.
 Overall, the poem captures the tension and danger of battle, while also conveying a sense of stoic determination in the face of uncertain outcomes. The use of imagery and metaphorical language adds depth and meaning to the piece, and the short, concise lines create a sense of urgency and immediacy.



Tuesday, December 13, 2022

POISONOUS THOUGHT

When I found your pale face on a pillow,

A nest so heavy with nothing on willow.

The sheded leaves had erased the allure.

I hardly noticed in the late-night obscure.

By this law, the knees are laced with spontaneity.

Must I insist on an absence more unreasonably?

When you look at me kindly and generously
 
Who am I to stop this flowing affection so harshly?

I can’t see for the glum in my bed in traverse.

It can stay in the heavens only by reversal.

If i can't watch the creator, I will lose you.

What angel takes the place of distance in leaf que?




Theme: The poem is about the complex emotions of love and loss. The speaker is grappling with feelings of sadness and uncertainty as they try to understand their relationship with the person they love. The poem touches on the themes of mortality, change, and the transience of life.

Summary: The poem begins with the speaker finding their lover's pale face on a pillow, which reminds them of the fragility of life. The leaves on the willow tree outside have fallen, erasing its once beautiful allure, which reflects the speaker's melancholic state of mind. The speaker ponders whether they should embrace the spontaneity of their emotions or try to distance themselves more unreasonably.

When their lover looks at them kindly and generously, the speaker finds it difficult to resist the flow of affection. However, the speaker is struggling to see past the glumness in their bed and feels lost and disconnected from their partner. They worry that if they can't connect with the creator, they will lose their lover.

The poem ends with a rhetorical question about what angel takes the place of distance in leaf que, which can be interpreted as a metaphor for the forces that pull us apart from the people we love.

Overall, the poem evokes a sense of sadness and introspection as the speaker tries to understand their emotions and their relationship. It touches on universal themes of love and loss and invites the reader to reflect on the fragility of life and the transience of our experiences. The language is poetic and metaphorical, and the structure of the poem, with its irregular rhyme and rhythm, reflects the tumultuous emotions of the speaker.

Monday, December 12, 2022

Book review of Nights in solitude.



Aadil Ghulam Bhat, a Poet, noveliest and the author of two poetry books "100 years of my painful nights " and his second entitled : "NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE"
Besides, English poetry he also has a great contribution in the field of literature, he has a contribution in Urdu ghazals and novels too. 



"NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE"
is an amazing and exquisite poetry book, written in a Cordially and ecstasy manner, having 54 astounding poems. 

The Poems are entwined and tied in a common thread of never ending adversities of life. 
The Poems paint an esoteric picture of life and describes the everlasting plight of man. 
The thoughts are antique, vivid and animate having a tinge of concealed wisdom. 
The poems are mainly about., Pain, love, eld memories, faith and Blasphemy.. 
"NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE"
is a verse based writing with Ocean of feelings and emotions. 
The rhythm and style of author is quite interesting and very much impressive over the entire collection of book. 
The Poems, "Black Hours" ,"Wind of Cage", "Two Ages of man", "Half a word" and "The false notion of man" Colours and pervades the whole book with both joy and sorrow, weeping and laughter and makes the book so exquisite and so mystical. 

The verses are vivid and astounding like incantations, like in quest for life's covert realities. 

The author has beautifully penned down all the poems and all the poems are dyed and tinted with the hue of immortal pain, all of all poems beckons the heart to adoration and solitude. 


A book review by Bhat naxim... 😊