SOLECISM

 

I silenced the rain.

That comes every night.

But this day,

It would have been teasing.

Eyes had been separated for centuries.

Are shocked by their shadows.

Ages have passed, so lonely.

Even if they lose their hands,

They don't leave.

Don't break the moment.

From the branches of time.

Every night you fall asleep.

In your nightmare

Send punishments.

I've sent my flaws.

This is a poem with an ambiguous meaning that can be interpreted in various ways. The theme revolves around the feeling of loneliness, separation, and the fear of being punished for one's flaws.

The first line, "I silenced the rain that comes every night," can be seen as a metaphor for the speaker's attempt to suppress the constant noise and chaos in their life. The next line, "But this day, it would have been teasing," indicates that the speaker is perhaps seeking solitude and quietness.

The line "Eyes had been separated for centuries" portrays the idea of being separated from something or someone for a long time. This feeling of separation is further emphasized in the following line, "Ages have passed, so lonely." The use of "eyes" in the first line and "hands" in the next line can be interpreted as a reference to the senses that are associated with human interaction and communication.

The line "Even if they lose their hands, they don't leave" is an example of personification, where the hands are given human-like characteristics. This line suggests that despite the loss of physical contact, the memories and emotions associated with it remain. The following line, "Don't break the moment from the branches of time," may indicate the speaker's desire to hold onto a moment of happiness or to prevent it from fading away.

The line "Every night you fall asleep in your nightmare" portrays a sense of fear or anxiety that the speaker is experiencing. The next line, "Send punishments, I've sent my flaws," may suggest the speaker's acknowledgement of their own shortcomings and the fear of being punished for them.

Overall, the poem conveys a sense of longing for connection and a fear of being alone. The use of imagery and personification adds depth and complexity to the poem, leaving room for the reader's interpretation. The theme of loneliness and fear of punishment for one's flaws is a common human experience and makes the poem relatable to many.

The Redemption of false notion

 

KASHMIR, MARCH, 2022.

 The morning moved faster than usual, indicating that the day would be eventful, and the sky hung low and gray. Late in the afternoon, I discovered Aadil in his room, sitting by the window, his brow furrowed. His fingers moved restlessly over the rosary beads in contemplation. Because the heavy velvet curtains were half-closed, the room was dim, and there was a perplexing wedge of daylight that fell on certain spot where Aadil sat, giving the entire scene a dreamy quality. I couldn't help but wonder if Aadil would recognize the true intent behind everything I was about to ask him to do, or if he would be shocked and upset.

As I stood there taking in the tranquillity of the moment while also feeling scared and worried, I caught sight of

of a dream I noticed Aadil, a much older and frailer version of himself, sitting in a dark green robe.

in the same location, looking more compassionate and generous than ever before, but with a permanent scar

on his heart shaped like me I realised two things at once: Aadil would spend the rest of his life here, and

in this home And that my absence had left a wound that would never heal. My eyes welled up with tears.

"Do you feel okay?" "You appear pale," Aadil commented.

I forced myself to smile, but the weight of what I was about to say kept me from doing so. 

My tone was a little grumpy and less forceful than I intended. "Not at all. I'm thirsty, and there's nothing in this house to quench it."

"Would you like me to inquire with Aysha about what she can do about it?" Aadil inquired.

"No, because I don't have what I need in the kitchen." It can be found in the tavern. "You see, I'm in the mood to get drunk."

I pretended not to notice the look of bewilderment on Aadil's face and continued.

"Would you go to the liquor store for wine instead of the kitchen for water?"

"Do you want me to get you some wine?" Aadil inquired, cautiously pronouncing the final word, as if afraid of breaking it.

"That's correct. I'd be grateful if you could get us some wine. Two bottles would suffice, one for you and one for me. But please do me a favour. Don't just go to the barn and get the bottles and come back. Spend some time there. Speak with the people. I'll be waiting for you here. There's no need to rush."

Aadil looked at me, half irritated, half perplexed. I remembered the face of Yasir in Kulgam, who had wanted to accompany me but was too concerned about his reputation to take the risk.

His concern for other people's opinions had held him back. Now I was wondering if Aadil's reputation would hold him back,too.

But, much to my relief, Aadil stood up and nodded. "I've never been to a tavern and have never drunk wine." I don't believe drinking is appropriate. But I trust you completely because I believe in our love. There must be a reason for your behaviour asked me to do something like that I need to figure out why that is. I'll go get us some wine." He then said his goodbyes and walked out.I collapsed to the ground in utter ecstasy as soon as he left the room. Taking the rosary made of amber. I expressed Gratitude over and over for providing me with a true accomplice and prayed that his lovely soul would never recover from the inebriation of Divine Love.

 

Poesy To Nymph

Let me not to the accredited

of fake promises

To me, fair you, you never

can be old,

You see my antique pen would

have expressed

Even such a beauty as you

alter now.

I Have eyes to wonder, 

but lack words to praise.

Yes my love, swears that

you are made of truth

I do believe on both sides 

thus is simple truth suppress’d

You are water to life and

I'm soul to fire.

So long as you can breathe,

or eyes can see,

So long lives this, and this 

gives life to me.

The poem is actually a sonnet written by Aadil Ghulam Bhat that speaks of a love that is so strong and true that it transcends time and space. The poet declares that he will not be swayed by false promises, and that the beauty of his love is eternal and unchanging. He compares his beloved to a work of art that cannot be altered, even by the passage of time. The poet is in awe of his beloved's beauty and acknowledges that his words are inadequate to express the depth of his admiration.

The poem expresses the belief that true love is a force that can overcome all obstacles and endure forever. The poet's love for his beloved is not based on external qualities, such as wealth or social status, but on the intrinsic goodness and truth that he perceives in her. The poet believes that his love is reciprocated, and that his beloved is also made of truth.

The power of poetry is also a central theme in the poem. The poet recognizes that words alone are insufficient to convey the depth of his love, but he also acknowledges the importance of poetry in expressing the inexpressible. The poet's antique pen is a symbol of the enduring power of poetry, and his inability to fully capture his beloved's beauty with words underscores the ineffable nature of true love.

The poem's concluding couplet affirms the timeless nature of the poet's love. The poet declares that as long as he and his beloved are alive, their love will continue to exist, and that their love gives life to him. This final affirmation reinforces the theme of the enduring power of love and the ability of true love to transcend time and space.

In summary, the poem is a beautiful expression of the enduring power of love and the importance of poetry in capturing the essence of that love. It is a timeless reminder that true love is not based on superficial qualities, but on the intrinsic truth and goodness that exist within a person.

Authors Note:

Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a books (100 years of my painful nights, Nights in solitude). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system. 

NIGHTS-IN-SOLITUDE-

A creative writing technique is usually characterized by a certain rhythm and style. The modern poet wears many hats: he can write ghazals, produce commercial genre, create poetry books, write for greeting card companies, work for websites and compete in competitions; Just to have a few names.

 Learn the basics of poetry.

AND WHEN I CRY.

And when my blithe queue

Died for isolation,

I only remember my

Dead memory of pale joy.

I proclaimed my solitariness

From uneven dead joy.

And when I come

Weeping and go crying.

However, you only come

Smiling and go laughing.

I have seen thousand countenance

Of masked face, fake smiles

Where I was imprisoned.

And I cry ...... and cry.

I have nothing to forgive.

My thirst was not quenched

Even with my own blood.

Can such pain be forgiven....

No, never, not at all...................!

Theme: Emotional Pain and Isolation

The poem portrays a deep sense of emotional pain and isolation felt by the speaker. The theme of the poem revolves around the feelings of loneliness, sorrow, and betrayal. The poem expresses the speaker's frustration and inability to find solace in their surroundings, leading to a sense of hopelessness and despair.

The speaker describes a sense of detachment from their previous life and experiences. The opening lines, "And when my blithe queue/ Died for isolation," depict the loss of joy and happiness that once existed in their life. The speaker reminisces about their past, remembering only a faint memory of happiness, now replaced by a sense of emptiness.

The poem speaks of the speaker's proclamation of their solitude, an attempt to express their feelings of isolation and loneliness. The phrase "uneven dead joy" suggests that the speaker is struggling to come to terms with their emotions, which seem to fluctuate between deadening sadness and fleeting joy.

The speaker is depicted as being unable to connect with others, only experiencing tears and weeping. Meanwhile, others around them seem to be able to smile and laugh with ease, further highlighting the sense of isolation felt by the speaker.

The poem also touches on the theme of false appearances and deception, describing the speaker's encounter with countless masked faces and fake smiles. The use of the word "imprisoned" conveys a sense of entrapment and confinement, adding to the speaker's feelings of isolation and frustration.

The final lines of the poem reveal the depth of the speaker's pain and their unwillingness to forgive. The speaker suggests that their thirst for happiness and fulfillment cannot be quenched, even with their own blood. The speaker concludes that such pain cannot be forgiven, highlighting the depth of their emotional wounds.

In verdict, the poem portrays a sense of emotional pain and isolation felt by the speaker. The theme of the poem revolves around the feelings of loneliness, sorrow, and betrayal. The poem speaks to the sense of detachment from one's past, the struggle to connect with others, and the difficulty in finding solace in one's surroundings. The poem also touches on the theme of deception and false appearances, with the speaker encountering countless fake smiles and masked faces. The poem concludes with the speaker expressing their unwillingness to forgive the pain they have endured, suggesting that such wounds may never fully heal.

Author's note 

Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a books (100 years of my painful nights, Nights in solitude). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system. 

NIGHTS-IN-SOLITUDE-

A creative writing technique is usually characterized by a certain rhythm and style. The modern poet wears many hats: he can write ghazals, produce commercial genre, create poetry books, write for greeting card companies, work for websites and compete in competitions; Just to have a few names.

 Learn the basics of poetry.

 A poet is one who conveys ideas and emotions to others through the written word. Although many people associate poetry with words that make poetry, a poet can choose one of the many different ways of writing to convey his message.

I will share some important ways to build a poem. 

1 Read a lot of basic poetry. 

2 improve your vocabulary (literary words). 

GRUDGE OF BROKEN HEART

Why, the moon knows.

Why did you cry last night?

The moon knows, why?

It was you who left me.

I was not enough, I know

I was half loved, every time

Tried to fix my blurred,

Faded and incomplete way

Just a quadrupled gesture

Just an outraged and withered

Part that has faded me,

Plucked me out.

It was just hard to unlove .

Never can the sun shine,

To end the never ending gloom.

The theme of this poem is heartbreak and the pain of unrequited love. The speaker expresses their feelings of hurt and betrayal as they mourn the loss of their love. They are struggling to come to terms with the fact that they were not enough for their lover, and they were only ever half-loved. The theme of heartbreak is evident in the way the speaker describes their emotions, using words such as "blurry," "faded," and "incomplete."

The poem revolves around the metaphor of the moon, representing the unknown and the uncertain. The moon is often used to symbolize emotions, and in this case, it represents the speaker's feelings of confusion and uncertainty about their relationship. The moon knows the reason for the speaker's tears, suggesting that there is some hidden meaning behind the heartbreak that the speaker cannot fully comprehend.

The poem also touches on the theme of unrequited love, which is evident in the speaker's feelings of being half-loved. They feel like they have given everything they have to offer but were never truly appreciated or loved in return. The theme of unrequited love is further reinforced by the lines, "Just a quadrupled gesture/Just an outraged and withered/Part that has faded me/Plucked me out," which suggest that the speaker's efforts to fix their relationship were in vain and only led to further hurt and pain.

In summary, this poem is a heartfelt expression of the pain and heartbreak of unrequited love. The speaker's use of the moon as a metaphor for their emotions adds a sense of mystery and depth to the poem. The theme of heartbreak is evident in the speaker's descriptions of their feelings, while the theme of unrequited love is reinforced through their feelings of being half-loved. Ultimately, this poem captures the raw emotions of heartbreak and unrequited love in a powerful and moving way.

Author's note 

Myself Adil ghulam bhat, I am a poet and the author of a  books (100 years of my painful nights, Nights in solitude). Poetry does not have such tips because it is the art of expressing emotions, feelings and can never be based on tips. Poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system. 

NIGHTS-IN-SOLITUDE-

A creative writing technique is usually characterized by a certain rhythm and style. The modern poet wears many hats: he can write ghazals, produce commercial genre, create poetry books, write for greeting card companies, work for websites and compete in competitions; Just to have a few names.

 Learn the basics of poetry.

 A poet is one who conveys ideas and emotions to others through the written word. Although many people associate poetry with words that make poetry, a poet can choose one of the many different ways of writing to convey his message.

I will share some important ways to build a poem. 

1 Read a lot of basic poetry. 

2 improve your vocabulary (literary words). 

3 write what you feel in day to day life on a roughly page then arrange them with minimum word length. 

4 Use concrete thoughts and give them shape use poetic devices like metaphors, similies, images, personification, oxymoron etc.... 

5 Match thoughts and then you will start to become a Eminant poet.. 

         You can also read my poetry on my Personal Blog or on Youtube Poetry Blog. 

PRISON OF OUTRAGE

 

As I, fumbling with horror,

Rushing towards the terror,

Gazing at padlocks of chains,

I the prisoner of outrage. 

Windowless walls,

Breathless expectancy,

Questioning the misty night,

Stucked within rusty bars.

That anguish of the anger

Absolves my fate,and

Fighting with my angry soul, 

Will free me from prison of outrage.

The theme of the above poem is the experience of being imprisoned by one's own anger and the struggle to overcome it. The speaker describes feeling trapped and helpless in the face of their emotions, which have become like chains and walls that keep them locked in a state of turmoil.

The poem opens with a sense of urgency and horror as the speaker rushes towards some unknown danger. They are metaphorically imprisoned by their own anger, which is depicted as physical chains and padlocks. The windowless walls suggest a sense of claustrophobia and isolation, while the misty night adds to the sense of uncertainty and unease.

As the poem progresses, the speaker reflects on their own emotional state and the toll it is taking on them. They feel breathless and expectant, as if waiting for some kind of release or resolution. The questions they ask of the misty night suggest a desire for answers or understanding, but they are met only with silence.

The final stanza suggests that the speaker recognizes the need to confront their own anger and fight against it. They describe their anger as an anguish that has trapped them, but they also express hope that they can overcome it. By struggling against their angry soul, they hope to free themselves from the prison of outrage.

Overall, the poem explores the experience of being trapped by one's own emotions and the struggle to find a way out. It suggests that while anger can be a powerful and overwhelming emotion, it is possible to overcome it through self-reflection and determination. The imagery of chains, walls, and rust emphasizes the sense of imprisonment, while the final stanza offers a glimmer of hope and the possibility of freedom.

About Author:

 It is rightly said words have the power to bring a better change in a person and a society. Aadil Ghulam Bhat from Hablishi village of South Kashmir's Kulgam district has released his book titled “NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE” Aadil Ghulam always thought poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system.His creative writing technique is usually characterised by a certain rhythm and style."Nights in solitude" is a poetry book consisting about 55 poem. The book is available at everywhere for readers in paperback and ebook as well. They need to understand that time is the one thing in life that you can never get back. Once it's gone, it's gone forever. So let's stop wasting time, and start a chance 

NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE'' is the heartbreaking poetry book and never ending lessons of life.

       To write to endure is the motive of this poetry and probably there is a lot of collection that arise from day to day thoughts. The book contains 54 poems as far that were composed in mean time.you can enjoy these poems as a never ending quest for endurance and fulfilment.

 

     Aadil ghulam bhat wrote his all story in poetry form that increases the beauty of his thougths and gave birth to this book.

AADIL GHULAM BHAT ENGLISH POET AND NOVELIST.

 It is rightly said words have the power to bring a better change in a person and a society. Aadil Ghulam Bhat from Hablishi village of South Kashmir's Kulgam district has released his book titled “NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE” Aadil Ghulam always thought poetry is a profound literature and plays a role with proper system.His creative writing technique is usually characterised by a certain rhythm and style."Nights in solitude" is a poetry book consisting about 55 poem. The book is available at everywhere for readers in paperback and ebook as well. They need to understand that time is the one thing in life that you can never get back. Once it's gone, it's gone forever. So let's stop wasting time, and start a chance 

NIGHTS IN SOLITUDE'' is the heartbreaking poetry book and never ending lessons of life.

       To write to endure is the motive of this poetry and probably there is a lot of collection that arise from day to day thoughts. The book contains 54 poems as far that were composed in mean time.you can enjoy these poems as a never ending quest for endurance and fulfilment.

 

     Aadil ghulam bhat wrote his all story in poetry form that increases the beauty of his thougths and gave birth to this book.